: Start with a conflict, tension, or an unanswered question that forces the reader to move to the next line.
: If you're writing a hard-boiled thriller, stick to gritty, active details immediately. Don't hide your tone behind unnecessary adjectives. 2. Write with Sharp Precision Vague language mutes the power of your message. Killer Advice
: Replace weak "verb + adverb" combos. Instead of saying someone "said crossly," use "demanded" or "thundered". : Start with a conflict, tension, or an
A killer first sentence is a handshake that refuses to let go. Instead of saying someone "said crossly," use "demanded"
: Don't explicitly state that a character is a murderer; show them vigorously cleaning a room or throwing out mysterious "trash" to leave breadcrumbs for the reader. 4. Execute a Memorable Ending A great ending should feel "unexpectedly inevitable". How to Write a Killer First Page - Michael J. Totten