The characters often state exactly what they are feeling rather than letting their environment or actions reveal their internal state. To take this from a "flat" draft to a immersive experience, I’d suggest leaning into more sensory clues to ground the reader.
Could you clarify if you are reviewing a , a piece of writing , or a technical paper so I can refine the tone? flatter
If you are reviewing a research paper or technical proposal regarding Flatter Tokens or speculative draft model training: The characters often state exactly what they are